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Song of the Legend by =bleedingfang:iconbleedingfang:



The sun upon the ruins of old,
Where treasured are troves of gold
And waiting in the shadows frame
Is the beast of light’s bane.
In the moon’s bleary light,
Hear the beast howl and fear its might.
Take the sun, and take the rain,
And lead the traveler in pain.
Bring him warmth and bring him life.
For his world has known naught but strife.
Wait in the morning sun
As the day has begun
Traveler slept and traveler left
He has left you and the rest.
He has gone and he returns
To the place where his fire burns.
He is left once more for the place
Where in an ancient race
For the treasures has long begun
Though many have tried, none have won.
For the beast has never lost its prey
To the light of this very day.
So heed a warning that’s been tried –
And proven in the ones who’ve cried.
Those ruins call and they seek
One who’s life-fire is not weak.
Traveler, traveler, fallow him close
He will lead to one who knows
The secrets that will show the way
To the place where it cannot be day.
And face the beast, face him with might
Else you will lose the fight.
Traveler, traveler, trust him well,
As it is he who will save you from hell.
©2009 =bleedingfang
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Author's Comments

Something for the Myhrine and Aibavan comic. It's a song about a legend in their world. It also is something of a basis for the whole comic, though it doesn't go into much detail about it.
I kept it kind of vague and short so it didn't spoil anything that I haven't already mentioned about the comic.
It's not very good, really. It didn't take very long to write and I was just winging it. :shrug:

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:iconrainbowfox17:
DID YOU WRITE THIS?! this is awesome, :3

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:iconbleedingfang:
XD Yeah.
Thanks^^

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I've never gotten a critique. :cries:
A critique would make me very happy.
:iconratchet27:
:w00t: on the sig! :D

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"Crazy minds think in a somewhat similar fashion!" -James

I BURN BOOK BURNERS!!!! :chainsaw:
:iconratchet27:
I was about to go...
"Oh! OH!! DRAGON!! ITS A DRAGON THIS TIME!"
:XD:

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I BURN BOOK BURNERS!!!! :chainsaw:
:iconbleedingfang:
XD
I kinda want to know how you would get dragon out of that. XD

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I've never gotten a critique. :cries:
A critique would make me very happy.
:iconratchet27:
Well, where are dragons most often found? In caves over a bunch of treasure! :D
Not to mention the words Beast and fire that kept popping up! :)

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"Crazy minds think in a somewhat similar fashion!" -James

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:iconkaeajath:
:clap: :clap:
I really do like this poem, no matter how many times you say it sucks.

The only thing that bugs me is the identity of the creature....

I don't know why, but my Dungeon Master part of me wants to say it's a Gray Render, but you probably don't know what that is....

I also seem to want to say manticore, but I don't know....

Can I please have a hint? I really want to know!

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:iconbleedingfang:
Ah...right. XD

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I've never gotten a critique. :cries:
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:iconbleedingfang:
It's not a creature.
Read the fucking artist comments and you'll see that.

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I've never gotten a critique. :cries:
A critique would make me very happy.

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